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OK time line is complete but more depth is required to gain a higher grade... There are grammatical and spelling errors within the essay. The primary purpose of the timeline exercise is to learn from it and to analyse the impact of technological and advances in the construction of a video. You need to add more depth in the analysis wrt to the emergence of special effects transition of black and white filming to colour and editing changes.. You need to establish/identify ideas that could be used in your video with regards to use of story and media theory...
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